Today, we made poems about our science fair topic, mine was about the five second rule. First we had to brain storm ideas about our poem then we had to add more words in to make it rhyme. We had to do the "3 rs" which means Rhythm, Rhyme, and Repetition. I really enjoyed seeing it come together at the end. It was tricky finding word to rhyme with words like mould and germs in my writing. The learning behind was to learn more about our science topic.
Here is my work:
Hello Sam,
ReplyDeleteSo your doing a science experiment on the 5 second rule are you? Well, I think it's a pretty cool idea and I would like to do something like that one day. But anyway, about the poem. I liked the rhyming but I just couldn't find the rhythm. Can you teach me the rhythm?
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Kia ora
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jack Smith and I go to your school. I like science fair, the five second rule. I like how you made this rhyme. It sounds gross how you to eat the food on the ground. I hope you have fun with science fair.