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Thursday, 8 February 2018

Draft Holiday Recount

Draft Holiday Recount
Yay I screamed as we all set up to start fishing on a massive
boat.
As soon as we stopped we threw line in the deep ocean floor
I started to get some bites l quickly wined up the rods line.

Look I yelled caught two jack macs.
It was Weston and the Wottens on the every single
one of us caught a small fish
at Urupukapuka island.
I was tired because we got up a 6.00 and it was 7.00 so
I took a quick nap.
Ahhhhh as I woke I up every caught lots of jack macs.
Now we are far out you could hardly see the shore.
Now it was time to caught all the big fish like snapper king fish
once again
threw the line down. We waited and waited finally action
my brother is hooked up he wined and wined he caught a big
pink fish but I fell asleep…
when i woke there were lots of in the basket like snapper and rock fish in there and so now we driving back   

3 comments:

  1. You are missing a few capital letters and full stops.

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  2. I like your work sam I like the acson in the story

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  3. It sounds a wonderful fishing trip...and so many fish! Did you cook them and eat them? Well done. From Grandma

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